Monday, January 12, 2009

commented blogs

These are all the people's blog that i commented on.
They are
1. Jack Butterfield
2. Frank
3. Joey
4. Jack Levy
5. Alex
6. Will Z.
7. Spencer R.
8. Danny L.
9. Dan L.
and
10. Ben

Thursday, January 8, 2009

O.S.R.B. number 4

For my last time saying this but the book I am reading is called GYM CANDY.
The reason why Mick failed to kill himself with a gun is because every time he would shoot the gun his hand would jerk up. So when he had the gun to the side of his head his hand jerked and the bullet skinned the side of his head. So Drew drove Mick to the hospital. When Mick woke up his mom and dad were in the room sleeping. When they woke up they started to talk to each other.
They told Mick that a police officer is going to come in and ask his some questions. So when the officer came they talked for a while. Then about 2 days in the hospital he was checked out and then about a day later he was checked in to rehab for 2 weeks.
When they got to rehab and after a little while Mick’s mentor man came out to get him. As Mick and the other dude were walking to the door to the rehab place the mom said wait and ran to the car. She was gone for about a minute. When she got back she gave Mick a bible to read when he is feeling sad.
That is the book GYM CANDY for you.

Tuesday, January 6, 2009

O.S.R.B. number 3


Once again my book is called GYM CANDY.
When the trainer came back he asked Mick to come into the backroom with him. On the meeting table there was pills. A little like steroids just not as effective. But has the same effects like strength and things that you do not want to happen but they will happen.
So when Mick was lifting with the steroids he felt and saw the difference in about 2 weeks. Mick was happy, but it wouldn’t be enough to beat the other team’s defense. So Mick went in to Popeye’s every Tuesdays Thursday and Saturdays and trained with Peter his trainer.
Then when the season came around and Mick was still on Steroids every game he broke the school record. Then about half way through the season he stopped using steroids but he didn’t tell the difference. But the truth was that instead of getting a first down every time he got the ball he would get three or sometimes four yards a carry.
Then in the quarter final Mick got thrown out of the game for charging at a player on the other team after he made Mick fumble the ball when he wasn’t paying attention. But they won the championship game against the team that they lost to last year. So then Mick’s friends Drew who was the quarterback got injured he went to the locker room and look through Mick’s stuff. He found and took all the needles and stuff so Mick couldn’t use them anymore.

When Mick found out he wasn't that happy. So after he got a call from Drew he picked him up in his car and they drove around. Then they stopped in a parking lot of a park. They both got out of the car and started talking again. Then out of no where Mick pulled out a gun and shot himself. But he didn't die.

O.S.R.B. number dos

Again my book is called GYM CANDY by Carl Deuker.
So it was about maybe the second or third week of the spring practices when Mick and his two friends made it to the second in the depth chart. Mick’s two friends played quarterback and wide receiver. One day when the team was in the weight room the starter running back came into the weight room and called Mick out. They had a bench off at 180 pounds. Mick could hardly do 5 reps. Then Darger (starting running back) do 20 reps. But everyone knew he could have done more. Then Darger stood up and asked Mick if he could still beat him? But instead of saying something he took a swing at Darger’s head. But it seemed like he expected it. He ducked and Clark the starting quarterback put Mick’s arms behind Mick’s body and Darger started to punch Mick. Then they stopped and left.
For a while Mick was mad at his two friends because they didn’t help Mick. So after the fight Mick went to his dad asking if he could still get a free membership to Popeye’s still. His dad said yes. So they went one day. Mick met his trainer and they started to weight lift. Then about two weeks after training Mick asked the trainer about steroids. The trainer said he would be right back.

O.S.R.B. number one

The book that I am reading is called GYM CANDY. At the beginning of the book Mick’s dad made Mick start school one year late because he wanted Mick to have an upper hand on the team so he would be bigger faster and stronger than all the other running backs on the team. Mick’s second year playing tackle football there was a new coach. The coach didn’t like Mick’s dad that much because Mick’s dad made the coach look like a fool because Mick’s dad played running back ran over the coach who played on the other team and ran him over to score the winning touchdown.
So during practice he would make Mick be the model and do everything the coach wanted him to do and he would make Mick be the tackling dummy sometimes. One day after practice when his dad picked him up Mick said he wanted to quite football. But the dad said that he shouldn’t because you will have coaches that yell and make you do things you do not want to do so just get use to it. Then when Mick was a freshmen in high school after his football season ended he got a call from the Varsity coach asking if he wanted to practice but not garneted to be playing on the team. Mick said yes and he and two of his friends went to practice in the spring not knowing what will happen.